When asked if he could write an effective direct-mail package on a complex electronic control system, a well-known direct response copywriter replied, "No problem. It doesn't matter what the product is. You are selling to people. And people are pretty much the same."
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Yes, there are similarities. But there are also differences in selling to business and professional buyers vs. the general public. In fact, here are seven key factors that set business-to-business buyers apart from consumers:
But in business-to-business marketing, the situation is different. The business buyer wants to buy. Indeed, all business enterprises must routinely buy products and services that help them stay profitable, competitive, and successful. The proof of this is the existence of the purchasing agent, whose sole function is to purchase things.
Importantly, the reader usually knows more about the product and its use than you do. It would be folly, for example, to believe that a few days spent reading about mainframe computers will educate you to the level of your target prospect - a systems analyst with six or seven years of experience. (This realization makes business-to-business writers somewhat more humble than their consumer counterparts.)
The sophistication of the reader requires the business-to-business copywriter to do a tremendous amount of research and digging into the market, the product, and its application. The business audience does not respond well to slogans or oversimplification.
"Our prospects are turned off by colorful, advertising-type sales brochures," says the marketing manager of a company selling complex "systems" software products to large IBM data centers. "They are hungry for information and respond better to letters and bulletins that explain, in fairly technical terms, what our product is and how it solves a particular data-center problem."
Don't be afraid to write long copy in mailers, ads, and fulfillment brochures. Prospects will read your message—if it is interesting, important, and relevant to their needs. And don't hesitate to use informational pieces as response hooks for ads and mailers. The offer of a free booklet, report, or technical guide can still pull well - despite the glut of reading matter clogging the prospect's in-basket.
But in business-to-business direct marketing, the concept of package or control is virtually non-existent. Why? Because the purchase of most business products is a multi-step buying process. A vice president of manufacturing doesn't clip a coupon and order a $35,000 machine by mail. First he asks for a brochure. Then a sales meeting. Then a demonstration. Then a 30-day trial. Then a proposal or contract.
Thus, it is not a single piece of copy that wins the contract award. Rather, it takes a series of letters, brochures, presentations, ads, and mailers - combined with the efforts of salespeople - to turn a cold lead into a paying customer.
For this reason, a business purchase is rarely an "impulse" buy. Many people influence the decision - from the purchasing agent and company president, to technical professionals and end-users. Each of these audiences has different concerns and criteria by which they judge you. To be successful, your copy must address the needs of all parties involved with the decision. In many cases, this requires separate mailings to many different people within an organization.
Business-to-business copy cannot be superficial. Clarity is essential. You cannot sell by "fooling" the prospect or hiding the identity of your product. Half the battle is explaining, quickly and simply, what your product is, what it does, and why the reader should be interested in it. "In high-tech direct mail, the key is to educate the prospect," says Mark Toner, who manages the advertising program for Amano, a manufacturer of computerized time-clock systems. "With a product like ours, most customers don't even know of its existence."
Concern for making the safe, acceptable decision is a primary motivation of business buyers, but it is not the only reason why business buyers choose products, services and suppliers that are not necessarily the best business solution to their company's problem.
Avoiding stress or hardship is a big concern among prospects. For example, a consultant might offer a new system for increasing productivity, but it means more paperwork for the shipping department ... and especially for the head of the shipping department. If he has anything to say about it, and thinks no one will criticize him for it, the head of shipping will, in this case, work to sway the committee against engaging the consultant or using his system ... even though the current procedures are not efficient. The department head, already overworked, wants to avoid something he perceives as a hassle and a headache, despite its contribution to the greater good of the organization.
Fear of the unknown is also a powerful motivator. A middle manager, for example, might vote against acquiring desktop publishing and putting a terminal on every manager's desk because he himself has computer phobia. Even though he recognizes the benefit such technology can bring to his department, he wants to avoid the pain of learning something he perceives to be difficult and frightening. Again, personal benefit outweighs corporate benefit in this situation.
Fear of loss is another powerful motivator. An advertising manager in a company that has handled its advertising in-house for the past decade may resist his president's suggestion that they retain an outside advertising agency to handle the company's rapidly expanding marketing campaign. Even if he respects the ad agency and believes they will do a good job, the ad manager may campaign against them, fearing that bringing in outside experts will diminish his own status within the company.
In these and many other instances, the business buyer is for himself first and his company second. To be successful, your copy must not only promise the benefits the prospect desires for his company; it should also speak to the prospect's personal agenda, as well.
In short, in B2B marketing, the rules are different.
Robert W. Bly is an independent copywriter and consultant with nearly three decades of experience writing successful promotions for Forbes, IBM, Ken Roberts Company, Boardroom, Nortel Networks, Praxair, SurfControl, Agora Publishing, and dozens of other companies large and small.
McGraw-Hill calls Bly "America's top copywriter." His book, "The Copywriter's Handbook" (Henry Holt), is considered by many to be the "Bible" of copywriting and was voted a "mini-classic of direct marketing" by the Direct Marketing Club of New York. The legendary David Ogilvy said, "I don't know a single copywriter whose work would not be improved by reading this book. And that includes me."
Email: rwbly@bly.com
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